Comments on: #Excerpt: Ben is about to talk to his father… https://shepline.com/2003/05/13/excerpt-ben-is-about-to-talk-to-his-father/ author | illustrator | digital designer Mon, 08 Apr 2013 18:30:48 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.4 By: soulsong https://shepline.com/2003/05/13/excerpt-ben-is-about-to-talk-to-his-father/#comment-84 Tue, 13 May 2003 08:08:58 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=75#comment-84 Yay, action at last!! More action wanted!! This is cool. And the present tense works really well when they’re doing stuff rather than pontificating and being miserable about Helen’s vanishment.

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