Comments on: Return to Iceland: Day 2 https://shepline.com/2004/06/29/return-to-iceland-day-2/ author | illustrator | digital designer Tue, 29 Jun 2004 15:41:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.4 By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2004/06/29/return-to-iceland-day-2/#comment-1168 Tue, 29 Jun 2004 10:12:48 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=638#comment-1168 Re: Ta’

Good good. The question is, will it make more sense to you once you’ve read a few of these entries?

Which poem was it that I sent you?

]]> By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2004/06/29/return-to-iceland-day-2/#comment-1167 Tue, 29 Jun 2004 10:11:45 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=638#comment-1167 In reply to fire_and_ichor.

Re: Word Choice…

Changed… thank ye! ^__^

]]> By: fire_and_ichor https://shepline.com/2004/06/29/return-to-iceland-day-2/#comment-1166 Tue, 29 Jun 2004 09:22:55 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=638#comment-1166 Word Choice…

The light is beautiful, setting off the virulent and irridescent colours of Iceland – the lush green pasteurs, the blue of lupins, the pale of cowslips, the scree, the moss, against blue skies and the heavy, dark clouds on the mountain top.

Are you sure you wanted to use “virulent” there? You’re describing the beauty of it. Virulent is “harsh,” “obnoxious,” et cetera, when not describing pathogens and such, in which case it would be extremely infectious.

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