Comments on: Comment and Critique please… https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/ author | illustrator | digital designer Tue, 09 Apr 2013 13:47:54 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.4 By: grapefruitmoon https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/#comment-1491 Sun, 14 Nov 2004 14:25:31 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=782#comment-1491 In reply to Thomas.

no, i met megan via livejournal and then met her in person in new york [twice!]. also, i know bára through my husband, kári. they went to school together and became friends and such. in moving here, i’ve acquired a lot of his friends out of necessity and because they’re good people. i did meet kári at college tho!

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By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/#comment-1490 Sun, 14 Nov 2004 14:22:04 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=782#comment-1490 In reply to grapefruitmoon.

As regards your million dollar art school education … is that how you know Megan? I seem to be developing some fascinatingly odd yet wonderful degrees of separation on my friends list… ^__^

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By: grapefruitmoon https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/#comment-1489 Sun, 14 Nov 2004 14:13:36 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=782#comment-1489 In reply to Thomas.

no problem! it’s nice to put my million dollar art school education to use once in a while 🙂

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By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/#comment-1487 Sun, 14 Nov 2004 14:04:45 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=782#comment-1487 In reply to grapefruitmoon.

Thank you. This is the kind of advice I think I need. I hadn’t noticed me focusing on the face that much, but now you mention it … something for me to think about definitely.

Thanks!

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By: grapefruitmoon https://shepline.com/2004/11/10/comment-and-critique-please/#comment-1484 Sun, 14 Nov 2004 13:17:42 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=782#comment-1484 oh wow these bring back so many memories from art school and short poses and drawing faster than i could think…

these look really great, except that it seems to me that you’re concentrating so much on the face. myself, i never drew faces in figure drawing classes – or if i did they were the last detail i added. anyway – i’m not suggesting you leave out the face entirely, but i think these drawings could be really strengthened by more attention to the figure and leaving the face a little sketchier.

i really love the detail of the feet and hands on that last drawing, btw. absolutely fantastic.

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