Comments on: A short critique https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/ author | illustrator | digital designer Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:38:23 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.4 By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/#comment-1684 Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:38:23 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=924#comment-1684 In reply to soulsong.

I’m sure that comment should have been concluded with a “So there!”

I am listening to the critiques that I get. And there is a recurring theme that my style can cause confusion (part of that I have to say is intentional – I just have to be careful not to confuse my dear readers so much that they say sod it), but there also is the recurring theme that when my style does work it works very well.

What I’m saying is, bearing this last in mind, I feel that I owe it to myself to see if I can finish the novel in the style that it has become and to see if if I can make it work.

I hope this doesn’t make me sound arrogant or un-listening…

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By: kellymarie https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/#comment-1683 Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:35:49 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=924#comment-1683 Hmmm … I don’t think I’d pay for a critique service from someone who is so careless with their typing. How hard is it to type an exclamation mark?

Am off to bed (it’s an hour later here!), more tomorrow 🙂

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By: soulsong https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/#comment-1682 Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:21:27 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=924#comment-1682 In reply to Thomas.

Sorry, what I mean is, “Your pseudo-visual scene-shifting technique is avant-garde and you should stick with it regardless of the continual criticism because you’re a literary genius and your work is sure to forever transform the artform that is the novel.”

*poker face*

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By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/#comment-1681 Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:16:56 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=924#comment-1681 In reply to soulsong.

I’m not entirely sure if that was the kind of answer I was hoping for…

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By: soulsong https://shepline.com/2005/01/26/a-short-critique/#comment-1680 Wed, 26 Jan 2005 22:08:10 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=924#comment-1680 Yay for conventional! 😉

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