Comments on: My third YouWriteOn review https://shepline.com/2006/08/24/my-third-youwriteon-review/ author | illustrator | digital designer Fri, 25 Aug 2006 08:07:03 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0.4 By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2006/08/24/my-third-youwriteon-review/#comment-2346 Fri, 25 Aug 2006 08:07:03 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=1411#comment-2346 In reply to aurora_floyd.

but what I really need to do now is just FINISH the damn thing, lol!

I second that! 😉

]]> By: aurora_floyd https://shepline.com/2006/08/24/my-third-youwriteon-review/#comment-2345 Fri, 25 Aug 2006 08:04:49 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=1411#comment-2345 In reply to Thomas.

At least you should end up with a decent list of things to look at/work on when you come to edit and revise. I’m giving the YouWriteOn crits a rest for a while – I’m getting too bogged down in the early chapters, but what I really need to do now is just FINISH the damn thing, lol!

]]> By: Thomas https://shepline.com/2006/08/24/my-third-youwriteon-review/#comment-2344 Thu, 24 Aug 2006 20:04:14 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=1411#comment-2344 In reply to aurora_floyd.

That’s an encouraging review!

That’s what I thought. Also, it seems to come from someone who knows what she’s talking about. I went and skimmed the biog, and had a squizz at the synopsis, and scanned the summary bits of the review and it all makes you feel that there’s something good in my story. I just have to weed out the not so good bits! 😉

]]> By: aurora_floyd https://shepline.com/2006/08/24/my-third-youwriteon-review/#comment-2343 Thu, 24 Aug 2006 19:53:46 +0000 http://journal.shepline.com/?p=1411#comment-2343 That’s an encouraging review! I would have been quite pleased to receive that one 🙂 Lots of encouragement – ‘talent…viable novel…well written’ – and they’ve given you some constructive comments about possible areas where improvements could be made.

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