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Reading reviews and reading tests

I’ve had my second reading test failure on my work at YouWriteOn, which surprises me because if anything I thought my questions were too easy. Would someone with an account over there mind going in far enough into the review…

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Another YouWriteOn review…

And to think it all started so well… Whilst this is quite well written… It does not get better… :-\ …I found the bleakness of it all a bit of a turn off.Also the opening did not grab me I’m…

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Writing, smiling, and jam

1. The progress forward of my writing is, this week, going to be largely dictated by a hot stove, and the 8 lbs of damsons and 9 lbs of greegages which I acquired from my parents’ neighbours gardens this weekend….

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My third YouWriteOn review

And, apparently, 24 hours after my third review I get my first rating. I’ll be intrigued to find out how the rating compares to the reviews I’ve had. Meanwhile this third one is an interesting one… You have talent, and…

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Bifrost and Birthdays

The bridge between the worlds takes me another step closer to the metaphorical The End… 97,054 / 100,000(97.1%) It is also Rachel’s birthday. So happy birthday Rachel!

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A productive weekend

Finally, after some two months have got back to The Novel, and progress is being made. The world is fast becoming a changeable and dangerous place, and the various forces are converging in battle… 96,378 / 100,000(96.4%) ~~~ In other…

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High Anxiety

I’ve had my first YouWriteOn review! I confess that I would have preferred something more positive; something that showed a greater sense of the wow, but it’s not unfair. I’m disappointed that the reader didn’t ‘get it’ quite so much…

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The Final Words

I still have the dramatic endpiece and cullmination to write, of course, however I now have a detailed map of how my novel ends. Very much a circle to have all the way around I think it is a nice…

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The layby of my immagination

The annoying thing about driving is that you can’t just stop and write down things that occur to you as you’re driving, particularly when you are cruising at 70 down the outside lane of A34. Similarly I don’t want to…

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The end of page 332

There is an explanation. I’m not saying that it is necessary the explanation, but it has more than a little to do with the resolution of the story. Will it be an end to Helen and Ben’s sibling rivalry?  

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The inspiration of the night

It’s a curious thing that there does definitely seem to be a correlation between the more time you have to do something and the less that you actually achieve. So it is, that with a whole weekend spread out before…

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The end is (not so) nigh

It’s always the same. The weekend is spread out before me with hours of quality writing at my disposal. Ample oportunity to to get within a last grasp of the finishing line that is The Novel. And when I am…

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Lost the plot?

For the record, I’m not watching the second series of Lost (currently showing on Channel 4. I’m not wasting my time on it anymore. I heard it was good. It look intriguing. I gave it a damn good go (I…

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A Celebration of Spring

A changeable weekend. An odd mix of cold and grey, and bright and sunny and warm weather. To complement this, I have found myself flitting from thing to thing, unable to settle for long. I’ve done a bit of gardening;…

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